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she was different
she wasn't understood
she liked wearing a hood
her parent's mistakes made her insane
she thought she was plain
but she loved her world
in which she drew her heart
and wrote her soul
timed passed and her father took control
he ripped it appart
ripping her soul
and becoming a scar at her heart
she wondered why?
why couldn't she be understood ?
she let blades touch her skin
bringing a wondeful scene
her blood stained
but she remained
she cut deeper until the day,she gave up
she let her wrists go numb
and her heart go sore
she became insane at heart
she cracked the word love into pain
she began to build her world again
she wrote her start
and drew her end
until one day
she became seeked
and a guy became aware
of her fragile heart that needed care
they both didn't know at first
but love build them close
she wanted to refuse that she was in love
he realized her in vain
her world was a compas
but it stopep at him
she became aware at her heartbeats
and most of all of her smile
a smile that she thought would never exist
her heart gave in
he fixed her soul
and she realized
love is insane
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A torn heart~by katnisskorramako

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2012-2014 katnisskorramako
this my chrismas present for a really close friend, I have to thank him for fixing me
I'm sorry, it sucks ;-;
merry chrismas and happy new year people! 2013 here we go !
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:iconjane-the-killer-kk:
wow that was deep 
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katnisskorramako Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Was it? *shrug*
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:iconjane-the-killer-kk:
yesh it was so deep i read it like three times 
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katnisskorramako Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
.3. thanks lyssa
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:iconcorgi-moon-pies:
what?
i loved that the boy helped her out, and from your description

that someone is real
:)
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katnisskorramako Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah :3 he's my friend
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:iconcorgi-moon-pies:
aww, that's sweet
:)
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katnisskorramako Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:3 yeah
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:iconcorgi-moon-pies:
good for you, we need nice people like that in the world
:nod:
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